I was so exited to taste the Lemons because I gad them before and ready to try It again. The lemons were sitting on a desk. We were in a line. When I got to eat it I was so nervous. When it went into my mouth it burst into bubbles. It tasted like vinegar, sour and sweet at the same time. I kind of had a feeling that it burnt my lips. It felt like fireworks and popping candy in my mouth and on my tongue. I loved the taste. I finished the whole melon. I wanted more more more and more because It was delicious.
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ReplyDeleteHi my is Kirsten I study at Papakura Central School. Amazing work,I loved your work about tasting lemons I loved the way you said like fireworks and popping candy in my mouth and on my tongue. Were you really really excited?
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Wow kriste this is amazing i like how you used lots of wow words. but you made a few bobos.
ReplyDeleteWow well done you have put alot of effort into this i can see And very well done with the wow word's
ReplyDeleteWow well done you have put alot of effort into this i can see And very well done with the wow word's
ReplyDeleteAmazing Kristie! I love all the wow words that you have used. Maybe you could go back through and fix up the little spelling mistakes. This reminds me of when I did this in room 8 with Miss McLeod. This is an amazing blog post keep up the great work!
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