We had a task where we drew our name in a cool design. This is mine.
Friday 15 April 2016
Star Explosion Writing April 15 2016
My Literacy Class Have Been Writing A Description About An Exploding Star!!! We Had To Watch A Video To See What A Star Looked Like First! Then we filled in a sequence map and a describe ++ map to plan our writing. Here is my description of the exploding star.
Star Explosion
When a star explodes it means the star has reached... the end of it’s life.
When a star wants to explode it starts as boiling hot star. It begins to bubble. The colours are orange and yellow. I think it is like this because it’s getting hotter and hotter and I also think the star is getting ready to explode. I wonder why are their little explosions first?
The star starts to get bigger and hotter with some mini explosion that looks like popcorn. It starts to get blue flames coming out from the sides, because it’s slowly turning into a big EXPLOSION!!! I wonder how old a star live?
Then it makes a really big flash that goes of the page. Then it starts to explode. The star starts to get blue flames all over it until the whole thing is blue.It’s because it’s getting ready to burst like fireworks and it’s gaining pressure for a BIG explosion!!!
Finally the final part! It starts to turn a vibrant blue and a dark blue colour like the New Zealand flag. Then it grows bigger, bigger and bigger. Until it goes of off the screen completely. Then it...FINALLY EXPLODES!!! I think this because it gets lots of power and flames to explode of off the screen.
I wonder why doesn't it explode all at once?
Overall stars explode in four parts. They explode when they are ready to die.
Thursday 7 April 2016
Tuesday 5 April 2016
Kristie's Autumn Writing
Adjectives
Similes
Favourite sentence
Attempt 1
Autumn is a season. In Autumn the days are getting shorter so we can get more sleep. The nights are getting longer because the sun comes later. The leaves fall off because the leaves are dieing. It’s getting chilly because It’s almost Winter. Some animals migrate to other countries so they won’t get cold. Some animals hibernate because they can sleep through the winter.
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Attempt 2
Autumn is a wonderful and colorouful season.In Autumn days get shorter because The sun rises later in the day. The sparkling nights are getting a lot longer because the sun comes down earlier. The colorful leaves are falling off because they are dieing. It’s getting a little chillier because It’s almost the cold Winter. Some animals like birds, butterflies and horses migrate so they won’t get too chilly and cold in the Winter, and other animals hibernate so they can sleep all through the Winter.
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Attempt 3
Autumn is a chilly season. In the chilly Autumn there are shorter days, and longer nights. The colourful and crunchy leaves are falling and gliding off because the are slowly dieing. It’s getting icyer and colder in Autumn because Winter is almost here! Some animals like to migrate to other countries so they won’t get that cold. Other animals like to hibernate so the can sleep all through the Winter.
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Attempt 4
Autumn is a sweet, flowery and colourful season. In Autumn days get shorter because the days are getting darker faster. The nights get longer because the sun is coming up later. The flowing leaves fall off so new colourful leaves can grow. It’s getting chillier because Winter is slowly coming. Some animals like to migrate to warm countries because they want to keep warm, while other animal like to hibernate because they want to sleep through the winter.
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Attempt 5
Autumn is a cold happy and colourful time. In the colourful Autumn the pretty blue days are getting cut shorter because the night is coming fast. The sparkling nights are getting longer because the glowing sun is rising later than usual. The beautiful leaves are slowly falling of the trees so the new colourful leaves can grow.It’s getting chillier because Winter is right around the corner. Some of the animals migrate to other warm countries so they don’t have to suffer the coldness with us, and the rest of the animals hibernate because they want to sleep all through Autumn and Winter.
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Friday 1 April 2016
Lemon Experience 1/4/16
I was so exited to taste the Lemons because I gad them before and ready to try It again. The lemons were sitting on a desk. We were in a line. When I got to eat it I was so nervous. When it went into my mouth it burst into bubbles. It tasted like vinegar, sour and sweet at the same time. I kind of had a feeling that it burnt my lips. It felt like fireworks and popping candy in my mouth and on my tongue. I loved the taste. I finished the whole melon. I wanted more more more and more because It was delicious.
WE HAVE NEW VALUES!!!
The Senior Syndicate has been learning about our new values.
They are called our people powers. We made a poster for the juniors about one of the values.
I did: Never give up!!!
My favorite thing about this activity is: That we got to put whatever we want on it!
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