Kristie's Autumn Writing

Adjectives

Similes

Favourite sentence

Attempt 1 Autumn is a season. In Autumn the days are getting shorter so we can get more sleep. The nights are getting longer because the sun comes later. The leaves fall off because the leaves are dieing. It’s getting chilly because It’s almost Winter. Some animals migrate to other countries so they won’t get cold. Some animals hibernate because they can sleep through the winter.

Attempt 2 Autumn is a wonderful and colorouful season.In Autumn days get shorter because The sun rises later in the day. The sparkling nights are getting a lot longer because the sun comes down earlier. The colorful leaves are falling off because they are dieing. It’s getting a little chillier because It’s almost the cold Winter. Some animals like birds, butterflies and horses migrate so they won’t get too chilly and cold in the Winter, and other animals hibernate so they can sleep all through the Winter.

Attempt 3 Autumn is a chilly season. In the chilly Autumn there are shorter days, and longer nights. The colourful and crunchy leaves are falling and gliding off because the are slowly dieing. It’s getting icyer and colder in Autumn because Winter is almost here! Some animals like to migrate to other countries so they won’t get that cold. Other animals like to hibernate so the can sleep all through the Winter.

Attempt 4 Autumn is a sweet, flowery and colourful season. In Autumn days get shorter because the days are getting darker faster. The nights get longer because the sun is coming up later. The flowing leaves fall off so new colourful leaves can grow. It’s getting chillier because Winter is slowly coming. Some animals like to migrate to warm countries because they want to keep warm, while other animal like to hibernate because they want to sleep through the winter.

Attempt 5 Autumn is a cold happy and colourful time. In the colourful Autumn the pretty blue days are getting cut shorter because the night is coming fast. The sparkling nights are getting longer because the glowing sun is rising later than usual. The beautiful leaves are slowly falling of the trees so the new colourful leaves can grow.It’s getting chillier because Winter is right around the corner.  Some of the  animals migrate to other warm countries so they don’t have to suffer the coldness with us, and the rest of the animals hibernate because they want to sleep all through Autumn and Winter.