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Friday 18 November 2016

Persuasive Writing

Fanta-stick Pal

Have you ever wondered about looking for that final touch? That perfect gift? Or an ultimate, unique, one of a kind thing? Well I give you the 99% wood, 1% brain power, and 0% Pla-stick…… the stick! Did you know that sticks are fun, helpful, and can be your new friend? Well now you know!

Firstly, sticks are fun didn’t you know? So these are the reasons why they are fun! You can play with them when your bored, because as I said before it has brain power, if you don’t believe me well you should really buy one yourself and try it! Also if you’re lonely your stick will be oh so happy to play with you, because it has feelings! Have you ever been so sad you just need to play? Well your stick will surely be a doll, you can dress it up, color it in, and lots more! It can also be your toy, like when you have no toys just get a stick and have fun! And if you don’t agree with me, why don’t you try it for yourself?

Secondly, it is very helpful, how is it helpful you say? Well imagine if your getting bullied, and your stick sticks up for you. Have your mum cooked the most delicious thing, but you can’t finish it all because the rest of it is stuck in the creases of the pot? That's just bad. Well you’re in luck, a stick can do the trick. You can scrape all of it off, just make sure your stick doesn't eat it while you’re scraping the delicious food of of the pan, apart from that you won’t regret getting this stick-tastic one of a kind thing! This masterpiece will be in your hands! Talking about masterpieces, you can use it as a one of a kind, special paint brush! You can paint anything with it, you can flick paint onto your paper!

Lastly, if you’re lonely you can get a friend, not just a normal friend, but the stickiest friend of all…. THE STICK (Dun dun dun). You will have the best time playing Harry Potter, also if you imagine if you were Harry Potter flying around it would be a better effect and you would have so much more fun! Also have you had that one friend that always left you, well the stick will never leaf you behind it will always stick by your side!

In conclusion the fanta-stick stick should be in your lonely hands today, because it is fun, helpful, and it is your new friend! Hurry up your time starts now! Go and fetch your new friend! Make sure to not pick it in from trees, you will hurt your pal’s friends! No trees were harmed in the making of the stick.

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